day tripper

Um, well I feel that it is okay to write this because it's about me . I don't really know what to say; but here: Your cheeks are puffy from ...

I liked the begining. It has a nice story line, an uncommon twist to it. The end was a little weird, but I guess everyone writes something a little weird ...

Yes I wrote it directly on the site. No rough drafts, no editing. It was like it was my heart was speaking. It hurt to write it, but I couldn't ...

* Note: This might get really deep. There will most likely be a lot of mistakes because I'm writing it directly on here. This is really special for me though, ...

Ahh, this is so good. name's Olivia. Haha, fo' real. And I have tried drugs, but never 'E'. Ew. x: But I actually really liked this. It was almost like ...

Ello Derek!(: Ugh, I have to rewrite this because of my icky computer. d; What I didn't like : - I think you need more details and descriptions. Like, I ...

I really like it! It reminds me of this a lot: I love it.(:

Since I'm done the story, its time to revise and rewrite! So here's chapter redone. Any other suggestions would be amazing. Chapter two: Surprise! Surprise! Evie sat patiently in her ...

Well, I didn't see too many mistakes!(: Haha, that's always a good thing. For a first post story, this was really good. Impressive!(: I'd love to read more, so don't ...

Well, I'm not going to lie, this needs some work. First thing, in the first paragraphy, who's we ? You had some grammer and puncuation mistakes. Some more detial and ...

I really liked the lyrics of this song because I can relate to them. It was enjoyable to read this, I enjoyed it.(:

My entry for the "On Fire" contest. Fire. Fire. Fire. Just say it over and over again, all you want. But, you will never understand it. "Fire is like a ...

This is very intriguing and I liked it a lot. I'm kind of tired because I've been babysitting for the past 8 hours but, if I was more awake I ...

I enjoyed this. It wasn't the best, but it was pretty damn good!(:

This whole story is too good. Some people who said "But why isn't she freaking out?!" Well, the way I look at it is that, maybe she's just different. Doesn't ...